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2. The table lists several problems writers or readers could find in an essay. In the column on the right,
identify whether each problem would be addressed by revising or editing.
Problem
This detail does not directly support the essay's
purpose
Task
Revision also includes making sure your writing
fits your author's purpose and audience.
This evidence does not connect back to the
thesis.
This word is not spelled correctly.
The style and tone in this paragraph are not
consistent with the rest of the essay.
This proper noun is not capitalized.
This is a run-on sentence.
Main idea: The revision process ensures that a nieon of uiti

in the sonnet 116 written by william shakespeare we can analyze the symbolism and say that he reuses the idea of love like a guiding star for the sailor.

reading through the poem we find out that in the line 7 there is a metaphor for the lover that is heading through the life events by love itself .

“asleep in his bed” is personified.

i needs a girlfriends

it ends with a marriage, but also with prospero giving up his power.

the tempest is a play written by william shakespeare between 1610-1611, it narrates the story of prospero a magician that sets a storm to wreck a ship, this sets the story to kill the king of naples. while it is a romantic style play, it isn´t traditional because of the ending, it end with the marriage and the magician giving up his powers.