Adilapidated old house with broken windows sits under a full moon. the wind howls in tune with the distant thunder. the door creaks open beckoning guests into its shadowy rooms.

what feelings would a character most likely experience in this setting?

a. anger

b. excitement

c. apprehension

d. irritation

   In my view, i would first imagine myself as a little girl lost... or looking... or traveling. A storm is brewing and there is a full moon. I come across a house that is old, sunk with cracked windows. Now the storm is--for me--a little hint-hint that i must get out of here. But now that i see a house that looks as though it could crumble, i would be nervous. 

My answer would be:  C. Apprehension. 

The error in the sentence is a dangling modifier