Which question should you not ask during the revision process? a) is the form consistent? b) is the content clear? c) is my word choice appropriate? d) is my grammar correct?

What is the problem with the following sentence: cameron, who has an extreme and unreasonable suspicion of other people and their motives, suffers from paranoia which is a psychological disorder characterized by delusions of persecution or grandeur, was absolutely sure that someone was following him even though he was absolutely alone and hadn't seen a car for miles and miles.

Amaple syrup producer records the amount of sap collected from each of his trees. the line plot shows the results of one day

2points how is the information in the "during" section of the "volcanoes" page organized?