Read the description: My childhood bedroom had two beds.
Which revision makes this description the most vivid?

A.
My childhood bedroom had two parallel twin beds covered in plaid blankets.

B.
My childhood bedroom had two beds and the beds were where the children slept.

C.
My childhood bedroom had two beds that were made of some kind of material.

D.
My childhood bedroom had beds with blankets and pillows on both of them.

A

Explanation:

"My childhood bedroom had two parallel twin beds covered in plaid blankets." its describing the room and how it looked.

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