Which sentence is written in a style for reader interest? Chanelle’s grandmother reminisced about times past as she and Chanelle looked through old photographs of friends and family.

Chanelle's grandmother told her fascinating stories about the people in the old photographs from when she was young and living in Chicago.

Chanelle and her grandmother looked through old photographs of when her grandmother was young.

Chanelle spent the day helping her grandmother sort through old photographs and other memorabilia.

- the heat nearly killed them that first summer.

the simple predicate of the sentence is camped.

walter refusing lindner's offer.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.