Any is appreciated.

"rewriting american history" concerns how history is represented to modern readers. based on your own experiences with history textbooks, do you share fitzgerald's concern that "each generation of children reads only one generation of schoolbooks. the transient history is those children's history forever--their particular version of america"? how do you think the process of history education might be changed to address this concern?

I do not share FitzGerald's concern

Explanation: I don't share FitzGerald's concern because I think history is always evolving, there are always new studies that reveal discoveries about ancient history that before were unknown, which make us change our concept about what really happened in that particular moment in time. Every event changes along we study it further. I think the process of history education must change as new perspectives on past events are discovered, this is in constant evolution and we should always be aware of that.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.