Penyuntingan(9 kesalahan) Kecelaruan identiti tercetus bila keluarga tidak memainkan peranan dalam pembentukkan watak anak-anak. Ibu bapa terlalu sebok dengan kerjaya menyebabkan anak-anak kurang kasih sayang dan perhatian Remaja yang diperlukan kasih sayang dan perhatian tidak dapat merasakan kehadiran ibu bapa sebagai sandaran pertama dalam hidup mereka. Ibu bapa tidak mempunyai mu keibubapaan yang terkesan dalam mendidik anak-anak. Oleh itu, sosial media telah mengisi kekosongan yang dirasai oleh remaja Ibu bapa mestilah menjadi pendengar yang betul berhubung dengan apa sahaja masalah yang remaja hadapi.

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During the revising stage of the writing process, what should you revise first? individual paragraphs the overall structure of your writing individual sentences individual words

Padma has written a paper on the effects of the black death, a plague that struck europe in 1347 and killed millions of people. she focused on three major results of the plague: • a smaller population after the plague led to higher wages and greater independence for workers. • the power of the catholic church weakened because so many members had died and others had lost their faith. • a lack of farm workers led more people to raise livestock rather than planting crops, changing the european diet. read her conclusion: it does not seem right to say that an experience as horrifying as the black death had any “good” sides. still, the changes that followed the plague improved the lives of peasants. people who had previously lived in poverty, forced to work for a single employer, now had higher wages and the freedom to change jobs. even so, the continent had been devastated and would take many years to recover. which statement best evaluates her conclusion? a. the conclusion effectively summarizes all the writer’s main points. b. the conclusion is engaging, but it introduces an unnecessary new idea. c. the conclusion is engaging, but only summarizes one of the writer’s points. d. the conclusion is engaging but it does not summarize any of the writer’s main points.

If an author wanted to write a book that showed me the humor and the tragedy of life in a distant county he or she would likely write a