Could someone who speaks spanish review this I wrote for my class? ¡Hola! ¿Cómo estás? Tome un derecho de seguir adelante en la carretera. Parece aquí en el signo de parada. Dé vuelta a la izquierda y luego vaya a la intersección. La panadería está al lado del parque. Usted llegó a la panadería.

Does it sound good? If I need to make any changes just tell me! Thank you so much

Just a few changes need to be made, otherwise it sounds correct.

Explanation: The sentence Tome un derecho translates in English to Looks here at the stop sign. Change it to Mira aquí la señal de pare, Look here at the stop sign. Or change it to busque la señal de alto aquí. Look for the stop sign here.

The next sentence that needs to be changed is Usted llegó a la panadería. You came to the Bakery. To change it, instead write this Has llegado a la panadería. You have arrived at the Bakery.

Other than that I think you did a fine job. :)

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