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Social Studies, 12.12.2021 04:10, smarty959

CAN SOMEBODY PLS HELP ME I NEED YOU TO RE WRIGHT THIS IN 4 PARAGRAFS PLS HELP PLS Original Comparing and Contrasting Minutes That Matter is an article that has some similarities and differences to Food that Fuel but let's start by talking about MInutes That Matter. My mom always “reminds me to check in because every minute counts. To start off about The MInutes That Matter Book the quote “You might imagine that the ability to call home and talk with your loved ones would be something to look forward to. But what if those phone calls left you with a $7,600 phone bill?” I would personally say having communication is priceless! A girl who stands up to how the US army are treating their soldiers and the reason why is because they were charging thousands, even millions of dollars on phone bills that the soldiers used to call their families.

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I compared and contrasted minutes that matter and food that fuels and i found out they had a few things similar and a few things different but can u believe in the us army just calling your family costed over 7,000 but thanks to 14-year-old Brittany Bergquist donating phones to the soldiers so they would not have to pay a dime to talk there family and thanks to 14-year-old Brittany Bergquist people have opened shops around the world so people can donate their old phones to people which saved soldiers thousands of dollars so help make the world a better place just like Brittany Bergquist.

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My revisions improved because I shortened what I wrote down the first time and I just added a little more detail to my writing and made it so that it would grab the reader's attention more when they're reading the paragraph. I told the reader how I compared and contrasted food that fuels and minutes that matter. I told them how she helped and what other people did to help two and how if they can try to make the world a better place.

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