Hey guys i have written some things but im not good with conclussioni paragraphs could you guys it has to have these things:
use a conclusion transition phrase at the beginning of your paragraph
restate your claim in a new way
remind readers of your topic and why it is important
summarize your argument
end with one of these four clinchers:
call for action
show positive change
show negative effects
discuss future research
here is what i have written:
the groups here today (high school group, and the administrative board) are here to discuss what they and others believe is unfair. the administrative board is requiring that to pass high school the students must do a specific amount of volunteering hours. the high school group is here because they believe that should not be a requirement they believe it should be optional.

the high school students spoke first. “we personally believe that we should not be required to volunteer for it would not be volunteering then” the students said. “we would like to have this requirement removed not just for us but for all high schools and students” the students said. the students began to speak again, “volunteering does not educate us, is this not why we are in school to learn? ” the students said. “volunteering is not school related it is volunteering to people when we have the time and at our own will not because our school wants us to” the students said.
the students believed this and spoke of volunteering this way mainly because of their lack of time throughout their day. the students already had class taking up 6 to 7 hours of their day, then studying and homework could take around an hour or two, then their jobs to support their family’s for around 7 to 8 hours a day most students wouldn’t have much time to do much else especially volunteer. the students think that not only would it be easier to volunteering on their time, but it would also make them feel better about it.
then the administrative board spoke. “we understand some students may not have time for volunteering but we also have teachers that can all students create a schedule to fit everything the students need to do in.” the board said. “volunteering makes you understand what it takes to people in need and it shows what kind of people these students are and can be” the board said. they board continued to explain how volunteering makes you a better person and boost’s your moral.