Ill give brailiest I'm writing an essay can someone please tell me if this is a good start. If its not can you please tell me what to change here's the topic
What role did alliances play in World War II? How does this role compare to alliances in World War I?
World war one and two were very devastating times that affected many lives negatively around the world. Because of the negative results of the wars alliances were created in the hope to stop more wars in the future.

I think that this is a great starter

The only thing that I would change would be the part, "stop more wars in the future."

I recommend you say

prevent future wars

Explanation:

Explanation:

It's a good start but, you should add more about how World War I and World War II affected People. You should add how devastating it was. But one thing you should NOT do is make it to long, because people will get thrown off and will find the passage boring.

the arab empire adopted the muslim religion as their main belief. arabs would influence the people from the territories they invaded towards islam (the muslim belief).

nevertheless, throughout the history of the arab empire, rulers brought intellectual individuals from other religions to their centers of learning. these other foreigners included jews, christians, greeks, persians, and indians.   these resulted in the adoption of important knowledge developed by these cultures by the arabic empire. for example, the works of aristotle were translated from greek to arab and indian scientists brought the numerical concept of "zero" to the arabs.

nowadays, 93% of the arab population is muslim, which at the same time is subdivided in sects including the sunni, zaini, alawi, shia. the remaining 7% is composed mainly of christians.