PLEASE HELP(write me a short paragraph, picking up from where we started.) Using the ideas you previously wrote in your Narrative Organization Chart and your introduction (exposition), you will write the body (rising action and climax) of your narrative story.

Important note: You will submit your introduction and body in this assignment.

View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission.

Using the ideas from your Narrative Organization Chart, write the body of your narrative.
Review the writing prompt on which your chart was based.
Review the ideas you created in your Narrative Organization Chart and the exposition of your story.
In your body, be sure to include:
rising action (two events) and climax
sensory language to make your story vivid
dialogue to make your characters more realistic and advance the story
300 words or more

HEY THIS IS ME FROM THE OTHER ONE YOU COMMENTED ON YOU WANTED 3.06 SO HERE IT IS

Explanation:

“Yuck” Kate yelled as Mr. Jacks bulldog licked her once again.  “Ive told you before we don’t have any more dog food or any food”.  They had escaped the force field the day before and were only able to take so much food as the supplies were low. They now were in the middle of a field with few trees for shelter. Mr. Jacks and Darby had found a water source earlier that day but it was only an old pond full of mud that only the dog could drink without throwing up. They needed to get food and water and fast if they were to find others and hopefully if they were lucky Kates family.  

They walked across the sun lit field for what seemed like ages although only a couple hours had passed. Finally, when the sun stared on its way back towards the ground, they made it to the other side of the field where there was and abandoned looking city. They tried not to get there hopes up but they were unsuccessful and ended up sadly finding out that there were no people here. They searched through some old buildings and what used to be a beautiful garden but found nothing. “Ouch” Mr. Jacks yelled as he stubbed his toe on a pipe. They all looked down and saw that this pipe was from a well! This well supplied them with loads of water that they drank like wild dogs. Sure, they were happy that they found water but they were still left without any food of any sort. With all of them very hungry they found a place for shelter for the night and slept there with a few moth eaten blankets they had found and no pillows. When Kate woke up, she found that Mr. Jacks had already waken and gotten water from the well for her and Darby.  Darby complained that there was no food for them to eat. Kate agreed for she had not eaten for 2 days. Then Darby slowly turned to the bulldog, “why are we lugging this dog around when our stomachs are empty, I say we eat it”. But Mr. Jacks quickly ruled that choice of food out. They decided to keep up their search of both people, food, and Kates parents. They walked through the old city, the alley ways marked with shadows and a feeling of emptiness. By evening they made it back to more fields on the other side of the city. As it got dark, they started to look for a place to rest for the night. They sank to the ground by a tree excused from the day. Darby whispered to Kate, “What's that glow from over there?”. It looked like the glow of a fire and they heard traces of weird sounds coming from that direction.

THIS IS WHAT I SUBMITTED JUST REFRASE CUS YA AND I GOT A 90 ON IT ONLY CUS I DIDENT INDENT THE DIALOUGE SO YA DO THAT

He right

Explanation:

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