When the kids were walking out of the secret meeting until one of them tripped over a cullender outside, and it was a time capsule it was buried for much hop for the future. On March 15, 2014, residents of New York buried it to hide the artifacts. The kids picked up the cullender then and bring it to an ally way and when they twisted it opened their faces were blown David said “that’s the stuff that was locked away to protect the city New York was already near ruins New York city had become a desperate place all this stuff was locked away from all of these members who did great things. It also had shown a passcode and all they could of think of was that “he will prevail.”

The kids used the time capsule to save the city because that was their home so when they opened the cullender it was a gas of relief coming from both. The kids saved the earth to protect the people that were in trouble Davis and Jackson were proud of what they did. Once the kids found out that there were artifacts in the time capsule, they were looking for hope. Some of these artifacts are to popular people like music artist, and technology, and more. Willam Franker would prevail because of his sacrifices that he had made.

In my conclusion what I wanted the reader to learn is that anything that is locked away always finds another way out of that lock. That’s what the kids did unlock that lock.
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