Revise the story that you planned in Lesson 1 and drafted in Lesson 2. Your story HELP I HAVE TO TURN THIS IN BY THE END OF THE DAY!!!

should still focus on two characters who have magically – and accidentally –
swapped bodies right before a talent show and must therefore perform each other's
acts.
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Not only should you check to make sure you included the narrative elements
discussed in Lesson 2 - character, conflict, plot, dialogue, and setting - but you
should also try to make these elements even stronger. For example, how might you
revise your dialogue so that it brings out your characters' personalities and attitudes
more strongly? How might you add more description so that the setting of your story
is even more vivid?
Your story should include the following elements:
• A main character with a distinct goal and personality
• Dialogue that shows how different characters think and feel
• Conflict that the main character must resolve
• An exposition that introduces both the setting and the conflict
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Rising action that builds tension and gives the main character a conflict to
overcome
• A climax in which the main conflict of the story is resolved in a dramatic way
Falling action and a conclusion that show what happens to the characters after
the conflict is over
You should have completed a draft of this assignment in the activity before this one.
If you haven't done so, go back and complete that activity now.

the beginning of the iditarod trail sled dog race. the iditarod trail sled dog race first ran to nome in 1973.   the trail they used is today known as the iditarod trail, first surveyed by the alaska road commission in 1908 and now one of the national historic trails as so designated by the congress of the united states.

what inspired

the children of nome were dying in january 1925. infected with diphtheria, they wheezed and gasped for air, and every day brought a new case of the lethal respiratory disease. nome’s lone physician, dr. curtis welch, feared an epidemic that could put the entire village of 1,400 at risk. he ordered a quarantine but knew that only an antitoxin serum could ward off the fast-spreading disease.the nearest batch of the life-saving medicine, however, rested more than 1,000 miles away in anchorage. nome’s ice-choked harbor made sea transport impossible, and open-cockpit airplanes could not fly in alaska’s subzero temperatures. with the nearest train station nearly 700 miles away in nenana, canine power offered nome its best hope for a speedy delivery.sled dogs regularly beat alaska’s snowy trails to deliver mail, and the territory’s governor, scott c. bone, recruited the best drivers and dog teams to stage a round-the-clock relay to transport the serum from nenana to nome. on the night of january 27, 1925, a train whistle pierced nenana’s stillness as it arrived with the precious cargo—a 20-pound package of serum wrapped in protective fur. musher “wild bill” shannon tied the parcel to his sled. as he gave the signal, the paws of shannon’s nine malamutes pounded the snow-packed trail on the first steps of a 674-mile “great race of mercy” through rugged wilderness, across frozen waterways and over treeless tundra.even by alaskan standards, this winter night packed extra bite, with temperatures plummeting to 60 degrees below zero fahrenheit. although every second was precious as the number of confirmed cases in nome mounted, shannon knew he needed to control his speed. if his dogs ran too fast and breathed too deeply in such frigid conditions, they could frost their lungs and die of exposure. although shannon ran next to the sled to raise his own body temperature, he still developed hypothermia and frostbite on the 52-mile leg to tolovana before handing off the serum to the second dog team.

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the founding fathers did not think women were asmportant as mern were and men could do more and better things then women