Does this sound ok Hatshepsut was believed to be the most powerful queen in all of Egypt's history.
Hatshepsut was a powerful and intelligent leader. There were people in the government who were very loyal to her. After a few years of being regent, she decided to become Pharaoh. She had herself named Pharaoh. She took charge of the country. Hatshepsut was a gifted and cunning leader. She had to be to remain in power for 20 years as a woman pharaoh. Rather than go to war, she established trade relationships with many foreign countries. Through trade she made Egypt a rich nation. Her time of rule was a time of peace and prosperity. In order for people to accept her as pharaoh, Hatshepsut began to dress like a pharaoh. She wore the pharaoh's headdress with a cobra. She even wore a fake beard and a short kilt like the men wore .After 22 years of rule Hatshepsut died. She probably died from a blood infection, but it is also known that her nephew, Thutmose III, was not fond of her. He may have had her assassinated. Thutmose III went on to become a great Pharaoh in his own right. As you can see Hatshepsut was a powerful leader.