Read a draft paragraph from an argumentative essay. using the bomb saved lives by bringing a quick end to a war that might have gone on for years longer. it is impossible to put a number on how many more deaths the continuing war might have caused, but there are indications. millions had already died in the pacific theater. whenever us troops invaded an island, they knew the fight was to the death. in the battle for okinawa alone, there had been almost 50,000 us casualties, while japan had suffered some 90,000 military deaths and at least 100,000 civilian deaths. of course, radiation continued to cause illness, misery, and death long after the bomb had been dropped. how should the author revise this paragraph? by using more conversational sentences by placing a topic sentence at the beginning by providing details and statistics as evidence by moving and refuting the counterclaim at the end.

Use this excerpt from the corpus luris civilis (justinian's law code) to answer the following question: with the aid of god governing our empire, which was delivered to us by his celestial majesty, we carry on war successfully. we ador peace and maintain the constitution of the state, and have such confidence in the protection of almighty god that we do not depend upon our arms, or upon our soldiers, or upon those who conduct our wars, or upon our own genlus, but we solely place our reliance upon the providence of the holy trinity, from which are derived the elements of the entire world and their disposition throughout the globe. --public domain from this excerpt of the prologue of the corpus luris civilis, what departure from older roman traditions is clear? the laws show that the empire has developed a bureaucracy that makes normal soldering unnecessary. the law now honors christianity as a central part of the empire's existence. the law explains that the roman empire is using war to spread roman ideas. the law has replaced old social class divisions with an egalitarian church,

Thesis statement for negative effects on immigration

What was the great awakening? a. a religious movement b. a social movement against slavery c. a political rebellion d. a scientific movement