Which sentence most needs revision?
in conclusion, the industrial revolution resulted in great growth for the united states.
o it is true that the industrial revolution had some drawbacks and disadvantages.
o but the advances in industry, communication, and transportation far outweigh any problems.
o people should stop focusing on the bad stuff and notice all the good that came from it.

How did the relationship between settlers and native americans change after the homestead act was put into place ?

What is the purpose of the system of checks and balances

Which line from extremely loud and incredibly close reveals a melancholy tone? as for the bracelet mom wore to the funeral, what i did was i converted dad’s last voice message into morse code, and i used sky-blue beads for silence, maroon beads for breaks between letters . . she said it was the best gift she’d ever received. i asked her if it was better than the edible tsunami, from when i was interested in edible meteorological events. she said, “different.” i wanted to tell her she shouldn’t be playing scrabble yet. or looking in the mirror. or turning the stereo any louder than what you needed just to hear it. it wasn’t fair to dad, and it wasn’t fair to me. i made her other morse code jewelry with dad’s messages—a necklace, an anklet, some dangly earrings, a tiara—but the bracelet was definitely the most beautiful, probably because it was the last, which made it the most precious.