Devon picked me up after school today in his dad’s car. It’s an antique from the 1950s and doesn’t even have safety belts! Devon drives really fast, but
other than that he’s a good driver.
Health Risks:

Your Rewrite:

The health risks include - fatal injuries by speeding and ejected due to the absence of seat belts.

Explanation:

As it is mentioned that car is an antique from the 1950s so there would be no legal obligation for not having and not wearing a seat belt. However, there is a risk present in speeding the car and it becomes riskier as there is no seat belt for the front seat or passenger seat.

Rewrite: It is found that there are 30 percent more likely to get ejected in a fatal crash die from their injuries so one should avoid driving fast especially if there is no sat belt and always seat belt if present.

yes. i think it is for sure.