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Can someone explain to me what is incorrect about my writing? i got a d- and i am confused as to what i did wrong. j'ai besoin de ma famille, de mes amis et de mes chats. j'ai besoin de ma famille parce qu'ils sont importants. j'ai besoin de mes amis parce qu'ils sont très sympas. et j'ai besoin de mes chats parce que je les aime. je veux intelligence, patience et plus les chats. je veux intelligence parce que je ne suis pas intelligent. je veux patience parce que je suis impatiente. et je veux plus les chats parce que les chats sont beaux.

Can someone (╥ω╥`) research a famous historical figure from a french speaking country. you may consider finding information on louis pasteur, napoleon bonaparte, pierre and marie curie, joan of arc, vercingetorix, peter rubens, françois dominique toussaint-l'ouverture or anyone else you prefer. in one paragraph of at least 4 sentences, write his/her biography in french. (4 points per sentence = 16 points) in a secomd paragraph of at least 2 sentences (or more also in french), describe his or her important contributions to the country he/she is from and to the world. (2 points per sentence = 4 points) *make sure you use your own words. **you may use outside sources (internet, books, magazines, etc.) to gather information for this assignment. however, be sure not to copy the information directly from those sources. copying information and presenting it as your own work is considered plagiarism and will result in a failing grade. you will need to rephrase the information into your own words and cite the source of the information you used.

Can someone plz . thx conjugue au present le verbe jouer