What is the best way to revise this sentence so that it conveys clear, concise ideas and does not change the meaning of the sentence? astronomy is the study of the sky that is all around us and the study of the mysterious objects in the vast reaches of space. question 5 options: astronomy is the study of the sky. astronomy is the study of mysterious objects. astronomy is the study of the sky that is all around us. astronomy is the study of the sky and the mysterious objects in it.

Astronomy is the study of the sky and the mysterious objects in it.

Explanation:

When you read the first sentence you have two principal ideas:

Astronomy is te study of the sky.

Astronomy studies the misterious objects in the space.

So now all the other words in that sentece make the sentence more beautiful but at the same time can create confusion, since there is no sky that is not around us, we can get rid of that, since that is not vital, and since in the term sky it´s involved the reaches of space we can get rid of that too, so we can create:

Astronomy is the study of the sky and the mysterious objects in it.

Which says basically the same, in a simpler way.

i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

(sorry couldn’t show the fonts in this comment field)

too much?

heres the link