Read the conclusion to a personal statement. (1) i’ve had some growth experiences. (2) they’ve me to improve my math skills. (3) moreover, i have learned to apply these skills to designing and constructing movie sets. (4) i’m looking forward to honing my skills by working as a production assistant on a film this summer. the best way to improve the conclusion is to a.) revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic. b.) add details about a future goal to sentence 2. c.) delete sentence 3 because it is repetitive. d.) specify the name of the film in sentence 4.

The best way to improve the  conclusion is to...:

A.) revise sentence 1 to restate a specific topic.

Sentences 2, 3 and 4 are linked smoothly and make sense. However, sentence 1 sounds too vague and lacking context. Growth experiences? OK, but how exactly? How did those experiences lead to the improvement of the speaker's math skills? Something is definitely missing.

first of all wood chucks don't "chuck" wood. none, and for the fun of the answer the amount of wood chucked would be a lot!

explanation:

a wood chuck is a ground hog, it belongs to the family of large underground squirrels. it belongs to the family of marmots. ground hogs eat grasses, berry's, and other vegetation.

"the monkey's paw" is a rare story in that the theme is actually stated in the story. sgt. maj. morris tells the whites that the old fakir who put the spell on the paw said, "fate rules people's lives and those who interfere with fate do so to their sorrow." the message is a warning, but mr. white doesn't believe it. even though sgt. maj. morris makes it clear that he tried wishing with unfortunate results and he tries to throw the paw on the fire,   mr. white makes a wish for 200 pounds only to find that he receives the money when herbert dies in a factory accident. according to the fakir, then, because mr. white had wished for something he should not have had, his son lost his life.

the second wish that mrs. white encourages him to make is for herbert's return--one week after his death. when the strange knocking begins at the door during the windy night, mr. white panicks, believing that the previously dead but still mangled herbert could have walked home from the cemetary and is now at the door. because he fears what his wife will find if she opens the door, mr. white makes his third wish--for the noise to stop.

therefore, he uses his three wishes and to his sorrow, loses his son and disappoints his wife, who fervently believed that their son was at the door. she wanted him back, regardless of his condition.

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