She met her friends in the lobby, the bottom floor, of the hotel so that they could head over to the refreshing pool for a cool, brisk swim. which is the best revision of this sentence? a. she met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim. b. she met her friends at the hotel’s bottom floor, which is the lobby, so that they could head over to the swimming pool for a cool, brisk swim. c. for a cool, brisk, refreshing swim at the hotel’s pool, she met her friends in the hotel’s lobby on the bottom floor. d. the sentence is correct as written.

A.She met her friends in the lobby of the hotel, and they headed over to the pool for a cool, refreshing swim.

Explanation:

The other options, like C and D, only make the sentence convoluted: "bottom floor, which is the lobby, so that they" is anything but a fluid way of saying something. Same goes for stating the objective of the meeting before stating that they are going to meet.

Option A might not have all the details, but it makes the explanation simple and clear.

she learned to understand that physical beauty wasn’t as important as being a good person.

the writer needs to avoid using abbreviations and check spelling before sharing.