1. a student has received feedback from an instructor stating that the essay requires more coherence. which of the following would be the best revision strategy to improve the essay's coherence? a. add transition words and sentences. b. add supporting details. c. revise the introduction. d. delete irrelevant details. 2. a student has received feedback from an instructor stating that the main point of the essay is not clear. which of the following revision strategies would be the most effective? a. correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors. b. add supporting details. c. revise the introduction to clarify the thesis. d. improve the organization of the body paragraphs. 3. read the topic sentence below from a body paragraph of an essay on healthy eating. then, choose which of the sentences that follow provide a detail that is not related to the main point of the topic sentence. one of the major differences between unhealthy and healthy diets is the amount of produce contained in the diet. a. on the other hand, people who eat the recommended amount of fresh produce every day have fewer health problems. b. diets that lack fresh fruits and vegetables have been linked to serious health problems such as diabetes, heart disease, and cancer. c. an unhealthy diet usually does not have an emphasis on eating fresh fruits and vegetables. d. produce can be expensive; prepackaged foods are generally cheaper.