"the program which is inspired by new initiatives in tennessee and chicago could benefit up to 9 million students, advisers said." would i remove the comma after students?

I would put a comma after "The program", but not after "student". Hope this helped.

The american colonists strongly opposed the tax laws imposed by the british government. the american colonists were angered by the presence of british soldiers who had found employment in america

Iwould say d but idk hope this !