During which revision phase should you replace ordinary words with more dynamic words?

What do critics say about art happenings and flash mobs

Which best explains how melville uses his description of ahab in chapter 28 of moby-d ick to comment on the nature of man? through ahab, melville symbolizes how guilt can take over a man’s life. through ahab, melville symbolizes how obsession can take over a man’s life. through ahab, melville symbolizes how inaction can ruin a man’s life. through ahab, melville symbolizes how isolation can ruin a man’s life.

Read the sentence. marissa heard the class bell ringing loudly walking down the hall. what is the best way to revise this sentence? `marissa heard the hall ringing loudly walking down by the class bell. `marissa heard the class bell walking down the hall ringing loudly. `walking down the hall, marissa heard the class bell ringing loudly. `walking down the hall, the class bell ringing loudly marissa heard.