Ineed proofreading this article for my school paper i had a rough sophomore year but they me with my grades and brought them back up and this year( junior year) has been perfect but for both years there wasn't a lot of fun activities our school is too underfunded and most money we get goes to the middle school last year we had a halloween dance, prom, and we had deminoin of terror that's all we had for activities this year we have no halloween dance, no deminoin of terror and most likely from what i've prom but i see all these other sheboygan area schools having dances football games and all this other stuff but we can't even get a single dance, i understand that we are in school for education but we are also here for a great high school experience before have to be pushed into the adult world and never have anything like this again but overall there teachers and education system is great but we are really underfunded and don't get a full high school experience

Hello, I added commas where need and also changed some words so you might want to look over it again to see if it okay for you and I would like you to know it's a bit wordiness, so I recommend to improve readability, consider breaking this into multiple sentences.

I had a rough sophomore year, but they helped me with my

grades and brought them back up and this year( junior

year) has been perfect, but for both years there weren't

many fun activities our school is too underfunded, and

most money we get goes to the middle school last year we

had a Halloween dance, prom,and we had dominion of

terror that's all we had for activities this year we have no

Halloween dance, No rule of terror and most likely from

what I've heard...no prom but I see all these other

Sheboygan area schools having dances football games and

all this other stuff, but we can't even get a single dance,I

understand that we are in school for education but we are

also here for a great high school experience before have to

be pushed into the adult world and never have anything

like this again but overall there teachers and education

system is excellent but we are really underfunded and don't

get a full high school experience.

explanation:

the intellectual community is a place like a university where people with high marks, or original thought or an outstanding interest in something gather. they take classes together. they discuss things. they argue sometimes, and not always in a friendly way. but if they argue, it is because they are passionate about something, and there is nothing the matter with that.

lately i've been hearing rumors that it is not the way it was when i went to school. the one thing all schools used to have was free speech. the 1st amendment rights were sacred. now i'm hearing they are not. students can be reported and disciplined for giving an off the wall opinion.

that is shameful.

intellectual ideas are meant to be discussed. they are meant to be chewed up and worked on. that is the primary responsibility of every intellectual community. if that is not the way it is, then that is not a school to go to.

social media, in my opinion, and this is just an opinion. i wouldn't take it too seriously, complicates everything to do with human communication. you can want to share things and others feel they have the right to be very critical or sarcastic or mean about what you share. lack of respect is an immeasurable intolerable condition and social media abounds with that sort of thing.

one of the things i really like about is how careful people are because they must have some idea that the mods are exactly what the word says they are. they police this board very well, and what is so remarkable about them is that they are no older than the average grade 12 student.

my hat goes off to them (which means i respect them quite a bit).