Michael is giving his friend feedback on her paper. which sections of his review contain constructive feedback?
my favorite part of the essay was when you described your grandmother's reaction after finding the frog in her purse because it was so funny and so vivid. however, i thought that the section with the pie-eating contest wasn’t very interesting. it just made me want to stop reading the essay.

i would suggest working on word choice, since you used the same words many times in the essay. use a thesaurus to find synonyms if you need to. you should change is the ending. i didn't understand it at all. what was your grandmother doing with that blanket? i don't usually like essays with lame endings like this one.

What is the source of tension in this excerpt? ellery searching everything insects filling the light fixtures ellery standing on the desks louise carpenter whispering

“to build a fire” what is happening to the mans fingers and toes

Read the short passage about the life of cesar chavez. cesar chavez is best known for his use of nonviolent means to draw attention to the poor working conditions of farm workers in the united states. chavez led marches, boycotts, and hunger strikes. it is even believed that these hunger strikes may have contributed to his death on april 23, 1993. chavez dedicated his life to improving the lives of farm workers. he used nonviolent means to fight for the improved treatment, pay, and working conditions of farm workers. he was instrumental in organizing one such famous strike against the california grape growers in 1965, a battle that lasted for years. at one point, chavez even called for a national boycott against the grape growers. his efforts over the years resulted in several victories for farm workers. after his death, chavez was awarded the presidential medal of freedom. which picture would be best to use on a yearbook page to illustrate cesar chavez’s contributions to society? a. a medal b. a dollar bill c. a grape d. a march