Which revision below is most effective? California's Glass Beach is an amazing place to visit. The beach there isn't sand, but colorful bits of glass that have been polished
smooth by tumbling waves.
California's Glass Beach is named for the glass that makes up the beach. The glass, in all sorts of colors, is smoothed and polished, by
waves. Amazing!
Glass Beach in California is just so amazing! Instead of sand the beach is made of bits of broken glass in all sorts of colors that has
been smooth and polished by waves.
Glass Beach in California is amazing. The beach is made of broken glass. There is no sand, only glass. Waves have smoothed and
polished the glass. The glass is found in many colors.

Judy blume's career as an american writer spans four decades and includes many literary awards. she is most famous for her novels geared toward pre-teens. one notable example is tales of a fourth-grade nothing. however, blume also has had success writing for an adult audience. three of her novels for adults reached the new york times best-seller list. in a 2008 interview blume remarked, "i have so many stories left to tell! " by that time she had written nearly 30 novels. judy blume is an exceptionally talented and productive american author. which of the following statements supports the main idea in this paragraph? blume only publishes books that she expects will win awards. blume prefers to write novels for adults rather than pre-teens. blume has had an extremely and uncommonly long writing career. blume is a gifted writer who can write for children as well as adults.