5.) A student is writing an argumentative essay for a class. The student wants to revise the draft to improve the development of ideas. Read the draft of the essay and complete the task that follows.

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Revise the student's draft by choosing the *TWO* sentences that give the strongest evidence to support and develop the underlined claim.

In fact, putting limitations on anything helps make things more beneficial for people.

Student(s) may have thought this made a good point that helps support the argument that ads should be allowed on school buses.

Ads would need to be limited to those that target adults outside of the school buses and not the children inside.

A school district can bring in hundreds of thousands of dollars in revenue from the ads over the course of several years.

An advertising program can greatly benefit a school district as long as there are limitations put on the ads.

c, his tragic flaw to cause his downfall

1.creeping like a snail is a simile used in this poem and it means the child is going to school unwillingly./a child is unwilling to go to school.

2. man becomes very frail and loses his physical strength when he becomes old, so much that his leggings that used to fit him snugly when he was in his youth are now too loose for him to wear, and that his shank has shrunk so much that this worldly stage is too big for a feeble actor like him. although, 'his youthful hose' just refers to his leggings/pants/ to shrink from danger; to shrink from contact.

3.the words "sans" means "without." it is a french word that is often used in english even today. so he is saying that in the last age of a man, the man is without eyes, taste, or anything else. he also says that this is the "last stage of all" and that it is the stage that ends a man's "history."

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yes they most likly are and have planed t try to bring human life and supplies there also(due to global warming and other harmful resorces)

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