To edit the paragraph, the writer should put a comma between hot and dry because they are coordinate adjectives. The word august should be capitalized, but summer and north should not. finally, the writer should use a serial comma in the list and set off which i love with a pair of commas to avoid confusing readers. Review the sample response. which changes did you suggest in your response? i. The coordinate adjectives hot and dry should be separated by a comma.
ii. August should be capitalized. summer and north should not be capitalized.
iii. There should be a serial comma in the list.
iv. A pair of commas should separate the phrase which i love from the rest of the sentence.