Hey if you like reading can you check this out cuz Ive been working on for some time and I thought that I should show it to the world

I kind of like it, it just needs some more detail to it. See when a reader goes to read a book they want a clear image in there mind of the story. The beginning needs a bit more detail to it and after someone says something you need to put in their sarcasm or fear or whatever plus when one of them get hurt like at the last part of the first image it said “That’s when I started to feel nauseated, like I was going to throw up. Thats when i blacked out.” Maybe put something like ‘I felt hot, sticky liquid running down the middle of my back, I started to feel nauseated. Thats when everything went black. And when you said the zombie thing maybe put zombie like thing…

Explanation: hope you like this answer pls give brainleist and rating, thanks =)

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

as you read the passage below, consider how dana gioia uses

evidence, such as facts or examples, to support claims.

reasoning to develop ideas and to connect claims and evidence.

stylistic or persuasive elements, such as word choice or appeals to emotion, to add power to the ideas expressed.

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