Can someone revise this and make it better? I will give you lots of points! The authors of New Chicago draws on from The Monkeys Paw by using characters dying from wanting to be wealthy. An example of this could be "I was to say that Maw and Meggins disclaim all responsibility," continued the other. "They admit no liability at all, but in consideration of your son's services, they wish to present you with a certain sum as compensation." Both stories the characters were intoduced to someone in the working business saying an accident happend, leading to the business to pay the wished for sum. Although this is the same the instead of the character from New Chicago instantly going and wishing for his brother back like they did in Monkeys Paw, he thought carefully and made precise details so he could try and make sure nothing bad happened again. In The Monkeys Paw the main character was peer pressured by his wife in part 3: "No," she cried triumphantly; "We'll have one more. Go down and get it quickly, and wish our boy alive again."

The authors of New Chicago draws on from The Monkeys Paw by using characters dying from wanting to be wealthy. An example of this could be "I was to say that Maw and Meggins disclaim all responsibility," continued the other. "They admit no liability at all, but in consideration of your son's services, they wish to present you with a certain sum as compensation." In both stories the characters were intoduced to someone in the working business saying an accident happend, leading to the business to pay the wished amount for sum. Although this is the same, instead of the character from New Chicago instantly going and wishing for his brother back like they did in Monkeys Paw, he thought carefully and made precise details so he could try and make sure nothing bad happened again. In The Monkeys Paw the main character was peer pressured by his wife in part 3: "No," she cried triumphantly; "We'll have one more. Go down and get it quickly, and wish our boy alive again."

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a source card is mage during research to tell the facts about the source one is using.

    prior to dee leaving home, the everyday objects in her household were just that- everyday objects. she took no special notice of any of them. however, once she returns home, all of these objects represent great culture significance to her. she is incredibly enthused about how great the wooden benches and old quilts are because she thinks it is in-style to be in touch with her own culture.

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