English, 03.01.2022 04:00, jecorie

Which revisions should Iggy make to best improve the readability for his audience (tenth grade classmates and his teacher)?

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Iggy should exclude trivial details or any sentences that add flair to the essay or passage. This is because having too much of this makes the essay overwhelming and overall not encouraging to read. He should reread the passage and replace weak or overused words in his essay. This is because weak words make the passage underwhelming to read and hard to pay attention to and overused words make the essay seem cheap. These are some ways to improve the readability for his audience.

I hope this helps, that you have a good rest of your day, and that you get a good score.

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1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

What is the central idea for this section only for dr martin luther king “i have a dream” speech?

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its specific purpose is to sell a product to people .

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