This journal entry will be completed in two parts. In this lesson, you will examine how different sentence types can add variety and interest to writing. Part of your learning will involve revising your own writing to improve sentence variety.
Now, before continuing with the lesson, you will complete the first half of your entry. Write a short, four- to five-sentence
paragraph about a topic of your choosing.
Then, after you have completed this lesson, come back to the paragraph you wrote. Analyze your writing to identify
areas where you could revise using different sentence types to add interest to your work. Revise the paragraph using
the techniques you have learned. Your completed journal entry should have both your original and your revised
paragraph.

I'm not going to write 150 words lol, but i will you with giving you examples of how they kept the animal population from revolting. napoleon made a list of rules, and told everyone how "important they are even though he was known to break them and then have them changed by the only animal who could read on the farm. none of the animals were intelligent enough to read, so they never knew if they had been changed or not which was an advantage to napoleon. napoleon constantly reminded them that if they revolted they would have to go back to mr. jones' way of things, which in retrospect was "worse" (wasn't really worse though, he was just saying that to intimidate since he didn't wanna lose his power). one of the main reasons they revolted in the first place was food, and of course if they revolt napoleon will not share food with them.

I'm guessing a 'fragment'. read over the sentence and question again before you move on.