My brother and I used to hate each other we often argued over every thing. Although as we got older. Things got good. I feel like our relationship is good now. Sometimes the old arguments effect our current arguments. As the oldest I defiantly now try to keep the peace. We both adore dogs. Compromising and truly listening have helped our relationship alot.

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My brother and I used to hate each other. We argued over everything. Although, as we got older, things got better. I feel like our relationship is good now. Sometimes the old arguments affect our current arguments. As the oldest, I now try to keep the peace. Compromising and truly listening have helped our relationship a lot.

Explanation:

paine is arguying that they had tried everything before coming to the conclusion that they needed to fight for their freedom.

argument: "every quiet method for peace hath been ineffectual."

claim 1: "our prayers have been rejected with disdain; and only tended to convince us, that nothing flatters vanity, or confirms obstinacy in kings more than repeated petitioning and nothing hath contributed more than that very measure to make the kings of europe absolute."

claim 2: "wherefore, since nothing but blows will do, for god’s sake, let us come to a final separation, and not leave the next generation to be cutting throats, under the violated unmeaning names of parent and child."

abater   ambary   ambery   baryta   baryte   bemata   betray   jarvey   ramate   ramjet

explanation:

those are all the possible words