Rewrite the following paragraph, changing all passive voice verbs to active voice. When you are finished, the paragraph should have only active voice verbs.. The corridor was shrouded in darkness. The hall was lined with huge doors of dark wood. The cold morning air seeped through the cracks and chilled my bones. The floor creaked with each step, adding to my fears. I was confronted by a strange sense of disaster. Everything was veiled in darkness. Gathering my courage, I timidly knocked on the enormous door. It opened slowly. I was welcomed by a kind-looking person. He took my hand and brought me into a beautiful parlor. “You are a new boarder here at Anaheim Military Academy. You are welcome,” he said. “A student guide will be given to you to show you around the school. He will take care of you.” My high school career had just begun.

she needs to add a conclusion summing up the entire essay along with an ending sentence to complete it all nicely.

figurative language is a resource that fiction writers use to make better descriptions of what they want to write about or express. they can improve their stories, as they can elaborate more vivid and colorful sentences. this way, the reader will be able to have more detailed images in his/her mind.

places, objects, people and even feelings or emotions can be described with a lot of detail to metaphors, similes and personifications. making different kinds of comparisons to make a description more specific, as well as assigning human qualities to non-human objects (and vice-versa) can be very useful for science fiction writers.  

on the other hand, alliterations allow writers to elaborate more entertaining and creative sentences. it consists in using a sequence of words that start with the same consonant letter. they can be used to emphasize something important the writer wants to express, or just as a fun literary device.