Dne 1/29/21 Handout 24A: Transition Revision
Directions: With a partner, identify and annotate opportunities in the paragraph below to include transitions, and then
evise the paragraph to include effective transitions,
zanne Wakatsuki's father disappearedShe claims that it didn't bother her nearly as much as the world she eventually
Ound herself in, Jeanne and her family Ilved in Ocean Park near Santa Monica, a block away from the beach. They were the
nly Japanese family in the neighborhood, and Jeanne's father liked it that way, Jeanne belleves he didn't want to be labeled
r grouped by anyone, Jeanne's mother moved the family down to Terminal Island. The island was a country as foreign
s India or Arabia would have been. It was the first time that she had lived among other Japanese or gone to school with
nem. She was terrified much of the time,