Jake Bryant played hockey for seven years. He was the goalie in an advanced youth hockey league in Colorado. During the last two years that Bryant played, he suffered five concussions. This forced him to retire from the sport at age 16. Hockey player Alexandra "Z" Karlis, age 17, was also sidelined by a concussion. She sustained a brain injury when a player on the opposing team blindsided her with an elbow to the head. Protecting kids from the long-term effects of concussions is the motivation behind Senate Bill 40, which Colorado recently signed into law.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

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