Give me a Procedural Essay: Revising and Proofreading you will be rewarded 100 points!!

Which revision of this sentence best uses direct characterization?

Complete the sentence. there are progressive verb forms in english. four six twelve eight

During the revising stage in the writing process, the author freely explores topics for further inclusion in the work polishes the writing, fixing minor grammatical errors gets his or her ideas down in roughly the form he or she intends corrects major errors and improves the work's content