I need help reviewing this English 2 Essay What is the topic of your paper?
perseverance

Where are you in the writing process?
I think I'm on track but ready for feedback
- So we started out on a prewriting Graphic organizer which was putting together cites and explanations from articles that we read previously. We then moved on to online. This is the rough draft before we do the editing and then finally the final paper. we need to make sure that there are transitions and background information that it will go smoothly and for it not to be choppy. the teacher is very picky and wants it to go smoothly and not to be choppy. That is probably the number one thing should we look at. also in English essays, it's very important to have the right grammar and punctuation. The essay must be 5 paragraphs no more no less
- Could you review my essay for higher-order concerns (thesis, organization, and paragraph development) and Grammar, punctuation, Making sure there are transitions and background information so the essay is smooth and NOT choppy

Will give if correct read the passage first of all, if someone says your dream is impossible, they’re wrong. you can’t prove that something is impossible-all you know is that [it] hasn’t been done yet. people said no one could scale mount everest, but in 1953, sir edmund hilary and tenzing norgay gazed down upon the world from its summit. people said that man could not fly, but in 1903, orville and wilbur wright made the first sustained powered flight in a heavier-than-air machine. people said, “okay, we admit that someone could climb mount everest, and we admit that man has learned to fly, but no one will ever, ever walk on the face of the moon.” if we can send three men a quarter of a million miles away and bring them home safely, is there any great task we cannot accomplish? which identifies the textual evidence that best supports the claim: the authors purpose is to persuade? a: the author shares historical information about the wright brothers. b: the author states that men have walked the moon. c: the author states that others who think your dreams are impossible are wrong. d: the author wants to know what tasks we cannot accomplish.

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Boss: oh no! that’s the phone again! secretary: blank boss: . a. shall i take it? b. will you answer it? c. can you do me a favor? d. may i hang it up?