Read the body paragraph from Paola's rhetorical analysis essay of Martin Luther King Jr.'s "I Have a
Dream" speech
Which revision would most improve the body
paragraph?
By comparing the Constitution to an uncashed check,
King successfully communicates his point that the US
has not fulfilled its promises to citizens of color. "In a
sense we've come to our nation's capital to cash a
check. ... It is obvious today that America has
defaulted on this promissory note insofar as her
citizens of color are concerned. Instead of honoring
this sacred obligation, America has given the Negro
people a bad check, a check which has come back
marked insufficient funds." In using the analogy of a
bad check, King provides a familiar framework that his
listeners understand. This framework illustrates the
US government's failure to fulfill its promises to all of
its people. King uses the image of a check to show
O rewriting the topic sentence to establish a clearer
connection to the thesis statement
O providing examples of analogies and how they
support King's argument
O using a smoother transition to the quotation to
create a focused line of reasoning
O adding more explanations of the analogy of a bad
check to ensure that it is specific

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

fearlessness is your answer

it about a duaghter

explanation: sorry thats all i could give i cant see the passage really