Which revision, if any, fixes the bolded part of the sentence? My grandmother, who lives in Virginia, my cousin, who lives in Milwaukee; and my aunt, who lives in San Diego, are all flyin
here for my Bat Mitzvah.
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My grandmother, who lives in Virginia; my cousin, who lives in Milwaukee; and my aunt, who lives in San Diego,
O My grandmother, who lives in Virginia, my cousin, who lives in Milwaukee, and my aunt, who lives in San Diego,
My grandmother, who lives in Virginia, my cousin; who lives in Milwaukee, and my aunt; who lives in San Diego,

My grandmother, who lives in Virginia; my cousin, who lives in Milwaukee and my aunt, who lives in San Diego, are all flying here for my Bat Mitzvah.

Explanation:

Resource Used: Grammarly

I copied and pasted the original sentence into Grammarly. The first suggestion it gave me was to fix the spelling of "flyin(g)." Once I did this, there was one premium suggestion. The premium suggestion said the punction in compound/complex sentence(s) was an issue. Specifically, they underlined the name Milwaukee and the semicolon next to it. As you can see, you can notice the adjustments that Grammarly approved.

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the anecdote makes readers feel sorry for the man’s lack of heritage, then reminds readers that the man has an equally valuable heritage.

to and without are prepositions, so a, b, and d are prepositional phrases. the adverb phrase is c, about the surprise.

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