Can you help revise my AEC paragrpah. Im not very good at this and this is pratice

During editing and proofreading, you do not need to a. check facts b. follow grammar, usage, and mechanics c. scrutinize spelling d. revise overall structure

Read the passage. (1) queen victoria of england remained in mourning for several years after the death of her husband, albert. (2) victoria did not like to be seen in public during that time. (3) she remained in seclusion in the palace and let her son, the prince of wales, represent her at most public functions. (4) she eventually returned to public life after prime minister benjamin disraeli persuaded her to do so. (5) upon her return, victoria showed concern for england’s poor and needy, which endeared her to her subjects. which is the most effective way to vary the sentence patterns in the passage? lengthen sentence 5. start sentences with different parts of speech. invert most of the sentences. combine sentences 3 and 4.

Which detail from "the city without us" most clearly shows us that nature is more powerful than it appears this is for apex 2019 a. the great size of the trees that grow in the new york botonical garden b. the worthlessness of the money left in the bank vaults that remain intact c. the hurricanes that frequently pummel us soil coastal cities d. the size of the japanese insect that can kill hemlock trees