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English, 24.10.2021 14:40, seanjung1128

02.09 Syntax and Voice You will revise one body paragraph from your informational article. Then you will write a reflection on the changes you have made. You will submit the original paragraph, the revised paragraph, and the reflection paragraph. View the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. This is your guide to a super submission. Review your informational article. Choose one body paragraph to revise. Copy this paragraph into a new document. Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax. Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences. Write a short reflection paragraph on the revision process. Describe the changes you made and how these changes improved your writing. Save and submit: The original draft of your body paragraph The revised draft of the same paragraph The reflection on the changes you have made Save your work to your computer or drive. Submit your work in 02.09 Syntax and Voice Pls help I wrote about video games PLS HELP ME

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