Read and find the errors in the paragraph. Rewrite its correct form in a separate paper. My first to visit to Singapore

We walked out of Harbourfront like two silly guy with suitcase. We have no idea where
could we find the MRT station. Luckily, I saw Indian security guard and ask them where could
we find the nearest MRT. I am quite shock because he spoke very fastly. I hardly catch a single
word. Honestly, I do not really understand what did he say, in fact, I just looked to his gestures
when he pointed the way we need to go.
We finally manage to find the MRT station after ask some more peoples, but the
adventure had not finish yet. When they entered the station, they didn’t know what to do. The
way it works. Then, we tap the electronic ticket and walked into the waiting area. First, we went
to the ticket machine, insert some money and get two one way tickets. Finally, our MRT comes
and we rode them to the Expo station. Next, we saw the map posting on the wall and tried to
understand them.
Finally, we get to Expo where the conference is being held. we felt so relieve when we
meet our frinds there. We told him about the incident. They bursted into laughter when they hear
the story. I often smiled when I remember the incident. I will always remember what happens
that day.
My first visit to Singapore was a visit to remember. I go there with my friends Eddy to
attend youth conference. We arrived laltely to Harbourfront because we did not got an earlier fly.
Upon arriving we are very confusing and nervous because there were no one to picks us up.
Later we obtain some instructions of how could we get to Expo where the conference were being
holded. We was asked to take the Mass Rapid Transit (MRT), but the problem was that it was the
first time we go to Singapore and we didn’t really knew what to expect.
I would loved to say that it is the end of the story, but it isn’t. The real problemoccur
when we want to exit the Expo Station. We tap the cards, but we couldn’t passed the gate. I
tapped it again, but it didn’t worked. My friend saw a small side doors and immediately walk
through it. Suddenly an officer appears and calls my friends. We were shocked, embarrassing,
and afraid of. I nervously explained to hers what happened.. She explained the problem to we.
She tells us that the amount of money in our cards were not enough, so we had to pays some
more moneys in order to pass the gate. We paid the money and tapped the card again. Before
leaving, I said, “Sorry, it is the first time.” She smiles and replies, “Its okay.”

here is the corect one, pls give brainliest! thanks

Explanation:

My first to visit to Singapore

We walked out of Harbourfront like two silly guy with a suitcase. We have no idea where

could we find the MRT station. Luckily, I saw Indian security guard and ask them where could

we find the nearest MRT. I am quite shock because he spoke very fastly. I hardly catch a single

word. Honestly, I do not really understand what did he say, in fact, I just looked to his gestures

when he pointed the way we need to go.

We finally manage to find the MRT station after ask some more peoples, but the

adventure had not finish yet. When they entered the station, they didn’t know what to do. The

way it works. Then, we tap the electronic ticket and walked into the waiting area. First, we went

to the ticket machine, insert some money and get two one way tickets. Finally, our MRT comes

and we rode them to the Expo station. Next, we saw the map posting on the wall and tried to

understand them.

Finally, we get to Expo where the conference is being held. we felt so relieve when we

meet our frinds there. We told him about the incident. They bursted into laughter when they hear

the story. I often smiled when I remember the incident. I will always remember what happens

that day.

My first visit to Singapore was a visit to remember. I go there with my friends Eddy to

attend youth conference. We arrived laltely to Harbourfront because we did not got an earlier fly.

Upon arriving we are very confusing and nervous because there were no one to picks us up.

Later we obtain some instructions of how could we get to Expo where the conference were being

holded. We was asked to take the Mass Rapid Transit (MRT), but the problem was that it was the

first time we go to Singapore and we didn’t really knew what to expect.

I would loved to say that it is the end of the story, but it isn’t. The real problemoccur

when we want to exit the Expo Station. We tap the cards, but we couldn’t passed the gate. I

tapped it again, but it didn’t worked. My friend saw a small side doors and immediately walk

through it. Suddenly an officer appears and calls my friends. We were shocked, embarrassing,

and afraid of. I nervously explained to hers what happened. She explained the problem to we.

She tells us that the amount of money in our cards were not enough, so we had to pays some

more moneys in order to pass the gate. We paid the money and tapped the card again. Before

leaving, I said, “Sorry, it is the first time.” She smiles and replies, “Its okay.”

what gradee ya in so we can do it im 8th grade

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