50 POINTS PLS HELP make a persuasive essay about why phones SHOULDENT be used in school use a counterclaim and a rebuttal

THING TO INCLUDE IN EACH PARAGRAPH
ethos
pathos
logos
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bandwagon
(for each one you in the the paragraph put in bold so ik)

introduction
hook
claim
explanation
(use each of these in the introduction)

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body par 2,

body par 3,

counter argument
Topic sentence /Counter claim

Reason people might think this

Conclusion

Claim restated
Ending remarks

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1. They are not just phones - Mobile phones are NOT just phones. They provide pupils with electronic dictionaries, magazines, maps, novels reference books, and scientific and musical instruments through applications. Headteachers should not dream of banning these from the learning environment.

2. “Banning mobiles phones will not stop them from being used”- Banning them will not stop them from being used – it will simply push that use underground. Much better for the device to be visible on the desk than hidden under it. This way, teachers will know if the mobiles are being used outside of learning.

3 .why phones shouldn't be allowed in school -  Cell phones shouldn't be allowed in school because they can distract from school work and disturb other students who are trying to study. ... Many kids use cell phones to cheat in tests; either they text the answer or ask for answers which is totally unfair to the other kids.

4. why phones shouldn't be allowed in school - Some children take pictures in the bathroom and text during school periods, while some others text rumours about other kids.

Some people said in the discussion that cell phones should be allowed in school in case of an emergency, but you don’t need to have your phone in the classroom because your parents and teachers know where you are.

she is outspoken and direct

its d because i know