Try to rewrite this description in a more mature style. This is my grandmother. She is old. She is small. She has got fair skin. She has got brown eyes. She has white hair. She has a nice personality. She has got a bad leg. She smiles a lot but she has pains in her tunee she has arthrills. She paints pictures of things like birds, animals and flowers. She remembers my birthday. She buys me nice presents. She wears a gold locket around her neck. It is from my grandfather He bought it for her when they got married. She likes it very much .

This is my grandmother. She is a senior citizen. She is a petite woman. She has a light complexion and her skin is crystal clear. Her eyes are brown in color. Her hair is white. She has a pleasant personality. Her leg is in poor shape. She grins a lot, yet she has arthrills and has pains in her tunee. She does paintings of birds, animals, and flowers. She is always aware of my birthday, she never forgets. She always gets me lovely gifts. Her neck is adorned with a gold locket. It was given to me by my grandfather. When they married, he bought it for her. It holds great value for her

i have read the novel roll of thunder hear my cry by mildred d. taylor.

1. this isn't like any other story i've read or watched because it is about a black family in mississippi right after slavery in the u.s. had become illegal. most of the novels i have read were about slavery. another point is that the author of the novel used symbolism in a way i haven't seen before. for example she uses thunder as something negative meaning something bad will happen. but by the end of the novel, she made thunder a good thing.

2.   one character that changed during the novel was stacey. stacey is the eldest child of the black logan family. around the begging of the novel stacey was avoiding the white boy jeremy simms. he had a dislike for jeremy's family. but at the end of the novel stacey began to like jeremy.

3. the author starts the novel with the problem that the children of the logan family have to avoid the white kid school bus while walking to school.

themselves

an intensive pronoun is a pronoun that ends in self or selves, such as himself, herself, themselves, yourself, ourselves. since band members is a third person plural, the correct intensive pronoun would be themselves. if the band was talked about as a collective noun, itself would be the appropriate intensive pronoun. intensive pronouns are used to add emphasis to the noun it's modifying which is why it directly follows it.