If you guys give me actual feedback, I'll give you brainliest ;) So for creative writing, I had to make a poem or a song, for someone you hold dear to your heart. I wrote this song, and please let me know if i have anything that needs fixing, because if there are no mistakes, I'll get 20 extra points, and I need all the extra credit i can get, because I have a D in the class.

Butterflies

Im waking up, im breathing in,

your next to me, smiling.

Your so sweet, its madness

i dunno why you do this but i love it

Im reeling in the catch of the day

laughing hard while you tackle me

im so in love, I'd call myself insane.

just to come by and be your soul mate.

Whoa-oh

whoa-oh

i think im catching butterflies

whoa-oh

whoa-oh

im loving you until i die.

That is a promise,

that i'm willing to keep

im being honest

when i say i need you with me,

i know your the hardest,

and i know that you'll miss me

Never gonna stop it

keep giving you kisses

I shake enough, every day

When I'm with you, anyway.

i love it when you hold me,

and i know your the one and only.

Im waiting for you all day

Im shaking when you say you love me

Im hoping we never end

i just wanna keep holding your hand.

Whoa-oh

whoa-oh

i think im catching butterflies

whoa-oh

whoa-oh

Baby, your my only light.

That is a promise,

that i'm willing to keep

im being honest

when i say i need you with me,

i know your the hardest,

and i know that you'll miss me

Never gonna stop it

keep giving you kisses

keep giving you kisses .

i never smile, i never grin,

but you made me feel so different

I always smile, i always grin,

my life's so good now that your in it.

That is a promise,

that i'm willing to keep

im being honest

when i say i need you with me,

i know your the hardest,

and i know that you'll miss me

Never gonna stop it

keep giving you kisses

that a promise, a promise.

I'm honest, so honest,

when i say i love you