Write 2 paragraph essay about an event you attended. Describe the music, dance and the purpose of the celebration!

I have celebrated many parties in my life.

– But here I would like to talk about a birthday party, which I enjoyed a lot

– It was the birthday of my younger brother.

– It was his eighteenth birthday

– I threw a surprise party for him.

– My parents were also with me in this plan.

– We invited a few of his close friends and some relatives.

– After my brother left for college that morning, I decorated our home with buntings and balloons.

– My mother baked and iced the cake.

– Actually she has a gifted hand at cooking and baking.

– I ordered some fritters, spring rolls, sandwiches and pastries for the guests.

– I even organised some games such as musical chairs, treasure hunt and passing the parcel.

– When my brother came home that day, we all were waiting for him.

– We welcomed him by playing the birthday tune.

– Everyone clapped and wished him happy birthday.

– He was really surprised and very happy. I could tell it from his face.

– The he cut the cake and we all enjoyed the cake and snacks

– Then we played the games.

– Everyone enjoyed a lot.

– I gifted a cell phone to my brother.

– He always wanted it but my parents wouldn’t let him buy one.

– I always felt his desperation for the phone, so I had planned to gift him one on his birthday.

– He received many other gifts also but my gift was the most special for him.

– We all danced a lot that day.

– I felt great happiness that day.

– I realised that true happiness lies in giving happiness to others.

– My brother is very dear to me

– May God give him a long and happy life!

Explanation:

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answer: 1 goes to 3

2 goes to 4

3 goes to 2

4 goes to 1

explanation:

the answer should be the first one. "many people find his lyrics very moving."

it by far makes the most grammatical sense and is very objective, removing any first person from the original sentence and keeping with the sentence fluency.