English, 23.09.2021 18:20, gwoodbyrne

PLS HELP ASAP 100 POINTS Read an essay about Edgar Allan Poe's story "The Black Cat" and look for weaknesses in the writing. Describe how the writer should revise the work, and edit the essay for errors in capitalization, spelling, and punctuation.
Your assignment should include the following elements:
Suggestions for how to revise the essay's reasoning, evidence, and understanding of the lesson content
Corrections to errors in spelling, capitalization, and punctuation
Cuts to any irrelevant information in the essay
You should have completed a draft of this assignment in the activity before this one. If you haven't done so, go back and complete that activity now.
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Ask yourself these questions as you revise:
Did I clearly and completely describe content changes I would make to strengthen the essay?
Did I suggest evidence from "The Black Cat" to support points that were unsupported in the essay?
Did I cut material from the essay that was unnecessary, mistaken, or illogical?
Did I mark the essay carefully to correct errors in grammar, spelling, punctuation, and capitalization?

Use this rubric to determine how well you're meeting the criteria for the assignment.
1. Where does the writer stray from the topic? What could be done to fix this problem? Explain what you would cut and cross it out in the text of the essay.
2. What misunderstandings or inaccuracies involving Gothic literature or Poe's use of suspense do you see? How would you suggest eliminating this problem? If necessary, cross out some words within the text of the essay.
3. Where does the writer fail to support her points with evidence? What evidence from the story would you suggest adding to support these points?
4. Read the essay again and edit it for errors. Find and fix as many spelling, capitalization, and punctuation errors as you can. Pay special attention to the errors you learned about in the lesson, but look for other types of errors as well. You may write your edits directly into the essay.

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